Edgy and Effective
I'm not sure why others didn't get your message - pretty straightforward if you ask me, and it's got some nice social commentary. I could tell the focus of the animation was not so much visual as meaningful, but I think the animation was adequate for your purposes. Still, there were parts, especially when it zoomed in, that could've been done better.
The combo of animation/images and animation/video was pretty successful. I found the whole thing funny and inspiring! - great voice, btw.