I HERD YOU LIEK THEM!
Get better at handling sprites.
That is all the help I can give at the moment...
To say this is your 1st try very good it wount be long untill you will be foruntpaged
P.S soz for poor spelling
I loved it :)
Good parts: The graphics weren´t quite as good as in the Super Mario Broz Z series, but they were much better than what you see in the average sprite movies. Also I really liked the music you added in this one and the sounds were good too. The scene were the three mudkips entered the house and were you saw the fight from outside was nicely done, with the lasers and stuff coming out of the door :)
Bad parts: I only have one complaint. I have some doubts if this is a good first episode for a series. Everything that happened seemed completely random and it doesn´t seem like an actual storyline is developing. But you can still fix that in the second episode, and maybe just a few episodes of pointless fights are cool too.
Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. I loved it. You did very well for your first sprite movie. I was hoping that this would come out with a good score and win a daily award, but it doesn´t seem like that´s gonna happen looking at the score right now :( Oh well, anyways keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next episdoe.
all i can say is that its so funny :-)