This is a masterpiece.
I don't know wht I forgot to review this when it came out.
Sure it was unclean and the animation was minimal, but it heightened the story. You know I've always loved your work, but this was the icing on the cake.
I wish you'd submit more flashes, I'd probably have you on my favourite author's list.
I guess if there was something to work on, It'd be slightly cleaner linework. Not too much though, because the messyness adds to the atmosphere.