good flash.

definitely has a lot of potential. run with it.

haha

i love it, its nice and random wit tiny hint of humour

greaat!

hey this was extremely well done, especially since you say you don't have a lot of experience in this. You have talent!

that was pretty good

even for a first flash, it looked amazing, smooth graphics, somewhat good emotion, and a bit of humor. good job

It COULD be good...

...if it was longer and if the characters had more personality. Also,this movie needs a proper story. Apart from that,great graphics (although,personally,I think you should have put more colors than the white,grey,black,and yellow) and good animation. I'll be looking forward to seeing this one be completed.