4/10 because of the drastic increase in quality
Well done
You have clearly taken advice from everyone by improving you animation and a story writing skills.
2/5
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The Adventures Of John Pt 3
John gets robbed!
My third in the Adventures Of John series. This is a slightly longer episode with a better storyline.
Good
Graphics and voice werent great but the concept was good
haha
i love these cartoons
well
You have to improve your graphics and voice