this is really dumb if you ask me, the art is pathetic and the ending is really pointless, sorry...
No hard feelings, of course...
Currently I have tried to stay away from japanimation because of SOME PEOPLE! Who I'v watched become compleat Japan molded zombies, not mentioning any names. cough cough. Also this is because most T.V. shows that catch my attention now have real actors which makes me miss my childhood. but this animations very clever dialog and dance scean showed me just how easily ammused I really am. Good Job! gold star* but I do have to agree it could have used some acctual animation/lipsync and some voice/random soudeffects incase you don't have the abillity to record. But I will not tell you to re-do this because for what it is it's fine and you should just take this into account during your next submission so you can get seven gold stars and take a prize from the tresure box!
Its okay for a start, but it lacks any lipsyncing (no clue if I spelled that right) or audio. let alone any movement in the pictures.
^^List Of Iprovements^^
1. Add Some kind of talking.
2. Add some movement in the characters.
3. Maybe a replay button instead of another play?
4. Just Really Animate, Its not a webcomic, its a movie.
Do those things and you will have a good flash going. :P
But then I'd be just like everyone else!! I was going for origionality!
Lol... Naw, I'm just kidding.
And don't worry, this was more of an experiment than anything. I was trying to see what the bare minimum that I could submit to NewGrounds, without being blammed was.
that waz cute
Assuming that's a compliment, THANK YOU!
twas cute I guess
Hooray! Cute is what I was going for.
Or something... I don't really know...