not bad for a first!
next time add in a play button, a preloader and a replay button.
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Well, this is the first toon I've ever made. It's not finished, because my trial version of Adobe Flash ran out. I'd like to get into flash animation as a hobby, but I can't spend 800 dollars on the newest version of flash. Also, I wouldn't know who to ask, but if any of you know an alternative, or outdated version that would be cheaper for me to purchase, please tell me how to get it.
Anyway, once I get that straightened out I'll finish this toon and it will be more entertaining, hopefully. Please criticize my animation style if anything (I already know that it isn't much of a story). Also, when I finish the movie, Agent R is clearly a villain. The movie is in no way meant to promote terrorism in any way.
Thanks to preffertobedead for the sound track.
Great first effort!
Don't listen to the other punks, this is a great first flash. It's missing technical things, but so what, you used interesting compositions and though the story is only just beginning it's intriging and holds my interest. You'll learn all that technical stuff with a good text book and time using the program. Good stuff.
Okay, I guess...
It's not bad for a rough version. I wouldn't mind checking out the finished thing.
meh
wasnt too bad untill it looped and the music started playing over it self. By the way though that music was pretty good!
Finish it-_-
Don't submit unfinished work, also you need a preloader(you can download the default newgrounds one from the newbie tutorial page thing). Very few people buy flash these days it happens to be a very easy program to steal, and that's exactly what people do :)
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