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"pharotek" Music by Frank Kapachi
Rest of the credits are the same as before in the first preview.
Again just give some tips on what eles needs to be fixed.
Edit: The text at the end of the preveiw was on single line. Unfortunatly I never got a chance to update it due to a demanding amount of school work and what time I have to work on the project has to be used rather than dealing with minor problems.


nice one :)

just like the last one, the polished version has much to offer! good job!

heavymetalclock responds:

Why thank you. I never thought in a million years that this little experiment of mind would become very original for the ngers here. If this is the kind of feedback I get from the previews, than I can't wait to see what happens when I submitt the full version. (Which should be done around january).

nice man new but cool

this has some protenal to become something even be put on the frount page just quit posting previews and you'll see it might just get their.

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heavymetalclock responds:

Thank you and yes this is the last preview I'm doing for this.


Not a bad start, I like your choice of music and the style of animation wasn't bad... try to add some more detail to such things as the cracked glass when the ball smacks the monitor, they looked rather unrealistic.

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heavymetalclock responds:

I really had a hard time figuring out on how to draw the glass crack, do you think you could pm me some tips on it?


Somewhat reminiscent of the Blue Ball Machine. Add bigger music, though, please.

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heavymetalclock responds:

I'll see what I can do but you have to be more specif about what kind of bigger music.

not bad

did quite understand it but i respect you skill in animation it was very smooth

heavymetalclock responds:

Thank you and thank you for your respectable review.

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2.70 / 5.00

Oct 3, 2007
8:11 PM EDT
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