Interesting, even if it's still drafty
I agree with most of the guys who reviewed you... clean it up and make stuff look better. You're good with keeping the interest meter up; keep us curious.
is there a plot?
better animation and i'll rate better
That was pretty cool, went really smooth.
And we all know how hard it is to make flashes.
That's was amusing
For a first time that's kickass, I goofed with flash and i'm just not cut out for it right now. maybe with some practice.