Interesting, even if it's still drafty
I agree with most of the guys who reviewed you... clean it up and make stuff look better. You're good with keeping the interest meter up; keep us curious.
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---READ BEFORE YOU WATCH!!!!!!---
This is my FIRST FLASH!!
keep you criticism constructive!
i know it doesn't really have a point..
i was just practicing.
EDIT:
thanks for the reviews, guys. ;3
i really like to know what you think.
and yes, im sure this is my first flash xD
......
is there a plot?
eyes bleeding
better animation and i'll rate better
Sweeeeeet
That was pretty cool, went really smooth.
And we all know how hard it is to make flashes.
Good Job.
That's was amusing
For a first time that's kickass, I goofed with flash and i'm just not cut out for it right now. maybe with some practice.