Started and finished today, this is the second 'Back Shelf Shorts' episode to be released into the big wide world of Newgrounds to fend for itself..
Hope you like it!
Thanks to Newgrounds for the Preloader.
Cute
~~REVIEW~~
Heheh this was cute, characters were presentible, the animation itself seemed abit on the short side but i think thats what you were going for, anyways it was entertaining
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and if possible add some subtitles
~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute
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O.O Ummmmm, O-K
Um... right.
It would have been better if rather then killing herself, the first girl just put a cap in his ass instead. This would have made a lot more sense and would have been a lot more amusing.
it was...
funny but too short... try to make it longer next time, still good job!
Thanks man, I appreciate the review, but, and this isn't meant to sound retaliative in any way, we are deliberately making these things as short as possible. If nobody is ever going to appreciate the 'short-but-sweet'ness of the Back Shelf Shorts then I suppose we'll just have to double the length or something!
Thanks again dude,
Greensinge