A mediocore attempt at a good idea.
When I saw Illiad I was pretty interested, I've just finished reading the Illium/Olympos compendium by Simmons so I thought I'd give this a look.
First thing. Was that a poorly cell shaded brad pitt? Lol. Bad call. Flash animation was a bit sloppy on the lips there as well although It was bearable. The narration was a bit stiff as well if your going to do narration spoken word stuff you should stick to your abilities not attempt to mimic a common style although to be fair it would been much better if the vocals had some decent production on them.
Bgm was ok although a bit more African tribal than old Romanic. Again a lack of decent production made it seem flat.
The style your using doesn't require much work in terms of flash animation so it would have been fairly simple to garnish it with a few nice touches. The odd crow here or there some debris etc.
Obviously I appreciate taking on even a small section of the Illiad is a task in in itself and applaud the effort.
Certainly would rather this than a sprite dbz/naruto collab. ^_^