it was alright
so did the homeless dude jump into that red car or was he kidnapped or something. graphics were pretty good and animation went smoothly so overall it was pretty good.
Author Comments
Just having fun when i was boarded, and thought add this to a music mp3 of dmx. Hope you like and feel free to leave any comments. Thanks i am new to drawing in flash but getting the hang of it. In the mean while i working on a series call capital hill....there is a sample. here is the link http://pirokidproductions .com/www/capitalhill.html
Thanks Again
Mmmmmm
you may have something just add some more radom stuff...
cool
not bad, keep it up..
Hmm.
Not bad. But it needs more. Like GameCharmer said, adding more random things like the homeless guy, would make it so much better. Your drawings are great, but I do agree with CraterCreator, clean up your line art a bit, and it will be perfect. I liked the music. Just have more animations, and it will be a great flash.
Cool
Add in some more random stuff like the homeless guy, fix the looping glitch where the background jumps, and throw in just a little more detail and you have yourself a pretty good flash that also doubles as a screen saver!
:)
pirokid responds:
Thanks good ideas.....