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Haven ep1

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I had some time on my hands so i did this

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Your Getting it.. but..

Nice movie, however I might suggest a few things to tweak it up.

1. Change the movie size, so you dont see the sides of white.
2. Use a different font, that is easier to read if you are not going to have voices.
3. Make sure your movie clips, (such as the Arms) are a little more fluent.

Spend a little time polishing the movie to clean up stray lines after you done.. and you have youself a decent plot and movie. Good work, you can do good I am sure of it.

cool

Hey did by any chance you based your storyline on 1984 the book by George Orwell cos the posters and stuff make it seem like that

secret-toad responds:

that was my insperation
i read it last year for class and i loved it

well ..

to be honest it needs a bit of work and some speech .. but apart from that it caught my eye ..