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Haven ep1

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I had some time on my hands so i did this

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Your Getting it.. but..

Nice movie, however I might suggest a few things to tweak it up.

1. Change the movie size, so you dont see the sides of white.
2. Use a different font, that is easier to read if you are not going to have voices.
3. Make sure your movie clips, (such as the Arms) are a little more fluent.

Spend a little time polishing the movie to clean up stray lines after you done.. and you have youself a decent plot and movie. Good work, you can do good I am sure of it.


Hey did by any chance you based your storyline on 1984 the book by George Orwell cos the posters and stuff make it seem like that

secret-toad responds:

that was my insperation
i read it last year for class and i loved it

well ..

to be honest it needs a bit of work and some speech .. but apart from that it caught my eye ..