it was ok
it was cool
It's a sad story, but it has some horribly-placed attempts at humor. I didn't even fully understand how she died until I finally just make an educated guess. The music wasn't too bad, though.
Anyway, just try to make it more serious, and it could be a really nice Flash.
Well you coulda watched episode one maybe
the story and comprehension was good, but "the composer" wasn't really a good choice of music for this particular flash. but this is still a good flash, the animation wasn't all to great but the story was kind of touchy.
6/10 good job!
The story is so sad, and the music is perfect....*sniff*