it was ok
it was cool
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Wishbone Ch. 3: To Give Thanks
Chapter 3 to my graphic flash novel series "Wishbone."
As always, I would appreciate it if you watched the first to episodes of the "Wishbone" series before you watch chapter 3 and vote. Thank you.
This is very awkward submitting this during Madness '07, but I seriously couldn't wait delve back into this tormented creature's mind. And I hope you couldn't either. This episode takes us further into our character's (name is revealed in this episode) past of twisted misfortune. Let's all bear with him for a moment.
Enjoy! I'll keep you updated on future projects, especially the Bohemian!
Uhm...
It's a sad story, but it has some horribly-placed attempts at humor. I didn't even fully understand how she died until I finally just make an educated guess. The music wasn't too bad, though.
Anyway, just try to make it more serious, and it could be a really nice Flash.
EKublai responds:
Well you coulda watched episode one maybe
it's ok
the story and comprehension was good, but "the composer" wasn't really a good choice of music for this particular flash. but this is still a good flash, the animation wasn't all to great but the story was kind of touchy.
6/10 good job!
Wow...
The story is so sad, and the music is perfect....*sniff*
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