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Super Mouse Game

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Its my first game ever, and I thinks its pretty good for a first. But that is you to the people of Newgrounds. Reviews are nice i should reply to them all, not that ill get any, but hey hopfully some one will.

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Opinion: This game was on the verge of being terrible. The brush tool was definitely used, but not very good, and easy to cheat, either moving the mouse with a fast movement, or doing the right click method many reviewers here have noticed.

Recommendations: Try making the cursor a small dot that is a color very separate for all the other colors. Even make the cursor flash if you must. Also, don't be afraid to use the line tool! Just as long as you thicken the lines nicely so you can't easily run over them. And, make the framerate at 120 so no matter how fast you move, you can't fly over a line. And add more color. This submission was extremely bland, and not very exciting. Also, place buttons that give you the ability to start and stop the music. Maybe even have multiple music choices. There are many tutorials that can help you with this kind of stuff.

it was ok

With out the music it would have sucked.

Cheat: Hold right click in to get to green spot faster.

boring

really boring and easy to win

^^..

not too bad for a first game ^^... but there are a few problems tho... an obvious 1 is the right click trick.. so.. set the actionscript to goto frame 1 when you right click or something ^^... err... then theres the issue of the overlapping audio... you need to stream the audio so that it plays again from the beginning every time you die... or.. put another 1st frame which would only hold the audio track and keep that on loop.. and the game starts on the second frame... *i wonder if you understand that hehe*... anyhow... the area on the outside of the path you are supposed to follow.. needs to be made non accessible also... this is because a few of your drawings.. particularly stage 3 at the bottom right corner there is a gap in it.. and the player can roam outside freely... yeah so... i think thats all i guess... oh yeah... a winning screen would be nice ^^....
well overall great effort ^^... keep at it.. and hope to see great flashes frm u soon ^^...

p.s. the music.... great as it is... is actually quite distracting from the game... *a more soothing piece would be a better option for a concentration game.. ^^..*

Flashsubmit responds:

ILL try and get better music and fix the problems.

Pretty good

This was a very good for a first flash but you could make it alot better. For example; add some colour.the "Screen That Does Nothing" was a bit unneccesary. Hope this passes!
7/10
4/5

Flashsubmit responds:

I guess ill put a button for the screen that goes nowhere.

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Sep 21, 2007
10:23 PM EDT