Nice.
I love the originality like my bro said, great job for your first submit man. Can't wait to see more. >) Peace
I plead the 5th
Author Comments
A flash I've been working hard on but at the end got tired silly of it and sorry but there is no plot. Please enjoy this to the best of your ability and thank you for watching. It was a learning experience, and I had fun doing it. Flash should never end up as work but fun!
Your input is most welcome
RadeMan responds:
Thanks Jazz for your kind words.
peace
Great stuff =)
this was really good, backrounds and enviroments looked real nice and detailed, only gripe is that it didn't really have any plot or story. But like you said, this was just drawing practice. Next time you could try tackling a bigger project, you got the skills and the talent for it =)
5/5
RadeMan responds:
Thanks Glenn I will do something bigger I've been thinking of doing things like comedy or action hopefully. Much thanks man for your critiquing.
Peace
different. creative.
i just started learning flash and i liked your story and the art work. very nice. i'll favorite this one :)
RadeMan responds:
THANK YOU!
Wow not bad
Ok you want some constructive critacism ? Well here it is: the tree bark needs more detail on it, maybe shade it a bit. Also the water looked pretty plain, need to add some white streaks to show which way its flowing and maybe add some alpha to it and make it slightly see through and have vague images of fish or the bottom of the water. Finally try to come up with some sort of story for it. Your backgrounds are very good u just need to add something to them to help make it more enjoyable.
RadeMan responds:
Very constructive critacism and a lot of thank yous!
Ill work on more animations in the scenes. Thanks
Berry's got the Blues.
That was one determined blueberry.
RadeMan responds:
:o word