Wow...............................................

A lot of the other artists say they didnt get banned and everything that Shott133 says in his review totally makes sence...U really fucked this up...

...

quote: got banned from here? I think not! If I was banned from here, then how could I not be posting this review? Gamecubicle didn't give me admin stats just because of that. (I blame Shott133 for that... unless that was added into the movie. :| )
And yes, I agree with Shott133 about the TV thing. It kinda gives away part of the video. I think you should have replaced that with something else, and maybe add some animation to the TV or something, not put in random text.
The part at the end was quite dumb, though. I don't think Yo Mamma likes nachos THAT much... (Hint: I said "I don't think," so don't be yelling at me for saying that.) And yes, there is no ending. If there was, then it wouldn't have ended like that. Besides, I know there are good videos out there, and they end out quite better than this did. If this had a full ending to it, then the rating would have gone up a bit higher.
If you think this is also a flame, think again, becuse this is a rough review that you're going to get from a lot of people.
---
The good part:
I only liked the way you used the sprites. They fit the people quite well(Except for Noodlez and Yo Mamma.). Heck.. especially me. :D Although, Sparkz wasn't done properly. It's not just a normal Shadow sprite, you
N00B!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wait a second...

I got banned from here? I think not! If I was banned from here, then how could I not be posting this review? Gamecubicle didn't give me admin stats just because of that. (I blame Shott133 for that... unless that was added into the movie. :| )

And yes, I agree with Shott133 about the TV thing. It kinda gives away part of the video. I think you should have replaced that with something else, and maybe add some animation to the TV or something, not put in random text.

The part at the end was quite dumb, though. I don't think Yo Mamma likes nachos THAT much... (Hint: I said "I don't think," so don't be yelling at me for saying that.) And yes, there is no ending. If there was, then it wouldn't have ended like that. Besides, I know there are good videos out there, and they end out quite better than this did. If this had a full ending to it, then the rating would have gone up a bit higher.

If you think this is also a flame, think again, becuse this is a rough review that you're going to get from a lot of people.
---
The good part:
I only liked the way you used the sprites. They fit the people quite well(Except for Noodlez and Yo Mamma.). Heck.. especially me. :D Although, Sparkz wasn't done properly. It's not just a normal Shadow sprite, you know.

My story?

First off, where's the ending? I thought you would have used your head and come up with an ending for it. Either that, or wait for me to write another part of the story so you could go and add it in. Yet the flash ends in nachos, that must be something.... *coughs*

The designs weren't what I expected it to be. The TV in Shott's room in the movie gave secrets away before you're supposed to know them, and if I hadn't have stopped you, the painting in the first scene would have gave something else away, too. I also thought that using sprites as characters was unoriginal, like Aposke's review, but what I really didn't get was why you used pacman sprites for Toasty and Nick.

The movie really ends in a cliffhanger. What happens to Shott and Brett, or Nick and Toasty? What about Gamecubicle, TS36, Aposke, Why?, Noodlez, Sparkz, and the rest...?

The sound doesn't exactly go with the movie, either. You could have dimmed the music when you got to a new song, instead of just a sudden and abrupt change.

The layout.... Well, let's just say it doesn't work out. The only mode that works is the play mode, both the Shott and Aposke modes just didn't work, and if they were supposed to, we don't know how. Also, the scene selection is scripted wrong; it takes you to the very beginning of the flash, instead of the parts it should have taken you to.

I have to say though, I would have never thought about the genetics part; it's good. If given the chance to finish my story (www.gamecubicle.net was hacked and I lost the first few parts, to those to care), I might have added that in, but the problem with that part is what Toasty said about "The fate of the internet forums resting in Shott's hands..." or something like that. That makes it sound like Xgen is selfish and only want them to themselves for his genes, and it also gives the same impression on Gamecubicle and on Toasty, and on just about every other person in the world who runs a forum and doesn't want it to die. The problem about that is that it is implied in the movie that I am a member of almost every forum on the internet. That's not even possible.

I'm terribly sorry for having to write such a negative review after I pestered you about making this, but I wrote a serious review. (If you're not steaming mad after reading this, pm me on Gc.net and I'll finish the story)

it was ok

I mean Its ok, But Yeah Its nothing too new ever think about doing one of those sprite jokes collabs kinda like Pheanix write or something...