good

only ur second movie so it was good.

Keep up

Hope you make it through

Ehh

It was decent

Could use some work.

What I would suggest is slow down some of it. I cant read the text because it goes by too fast. I get lafway through reading the longer stuff and its gone. Also, use tweens instead of FBF moving objects manually... Some sounds would be great, this lacks the sound part. Another tip would be to create a walking cycle.

So after you improve those things, I think you can create much higher quality flash.
But for effort you get 5/5 :D It seems you actually tried here.

it was ok

just make the colors better and maby the grafx and it would be awsome!