....*looks around* Well...I have little to say...

Well, I have little to say... you did okay with the man running, better then what I would've done... *laughs* But the video was a bit...*coughs* You know... short and sort of off, yeah? First off, you could've had something chasing the boy/man/whatever, at least.. you know? Second, you could've done some other music, like a dramatic clip from a classical song with the violins and trumpets and all, yeah? And lastly, no offence on this!!! but when it showed they guy dead some how... his arm was a bit... short, yeah?

4 out of 10
2 out of 5
" Okay, but needs a bit more touching up, lol... Then again, this is only practice! XD"

Not bad

That wasn't half bad well done.6/10

Needed more to it.

When I read your author's comments, I thought 'oh great it's just going to be a guy running', fortunately it was more than that, but not much, he ran into the screen and that was it, I know this was only a test but surely you could have done more with it, perhaps you could have gone into the guy's subconscious or something and shown some freaky events, it would have given the movie a point and it would have made it much more worth watching.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

OW thats gotta hurt

i mean realy good art work nice music but no plot also too short but great plus i can't say that this sucks cause what i'm workin' on suck ASS

good movie

a bit skippy

drawing is pretty decent, im sure you could color it better, but you should put a few more frames in. it would look alot smoother that way.