Ummm.... Uhhhh
a 2 for trying. Let's just say im not gonna watch ep. 2....
man nobody is gonna like ur flash if U dont appreciate it urself. i mean, srsly put some effort! Do you know, for the intro and teh first few frames... i actually thought my pc was lagging... turned out that u only animated one tenth of the frames that should have been there. Unless ur pc runs at 1mhz with half a byte of ram, you have no excuse for effortless work. Remember; all the flash gods here at NG don't leave out the effort in their work. And their flash is amazing. So you, the enduring amateur, why should you be the one to leave your flash effortless?
You can say this review is abusive, i dont care. But i just want to let you know, if you dont care about your own flash, i dont care about you.
Some things to do:
-increase frame rate.
-make sound files more clear.
-DONT LEAVE HALF AN HOUR TO READ 2 LINES OF TEXT
-don't submit a movie like this until it's FINISHED. no part two's for movies this short.
-And finally, you need to ANIMATE. Flash is meant for ANIMATING, but you made this more like... a slideshow. There weren't enough frames to create the illusion that the drawings were MOVING. You did do one thing though: you successfully emulated lag :)