not bad
not bad for your first flash, tbh its better then anything i could do! lol
music/more story maybe?
Author Comments
This is my first ever flash animation so please try and vote fair.
Some of you may notice so im going to say that this was heavily inspired by Vinnie Veritas's Work and so i am submitting this as a tribute to his stuff.
EDIT: i shouldnt just loop anymore hopefully. And i actually included the splash part this time. =P
meh
tis boring,quite limited animations
You're welcome for the suggestion.
This was a bit of an improvement from the last one, but the splash was a little...... poor.
FFFreak16 responds:
Yes i agree. As i have said this animation was mostly a test to see if i could do it. Obviously i didnt spend more than a few hours on it but i plan to either remake this or create something new.
In fact i have a small comic i drew a while back which i was considering changing into a small animation. Which i would spend a lot more time on and would be a lot longer overall.
But this was pretty much so i could get an insight on how i did and what is expected.
Thanks for the review.
niceley animated
your people are good but try to have story lines if this was to see if people liked it i did make a bigger and better one
FFFreak16 responds:
Thank you for the compliment.
I do plan on making something different with more of a storyline to it next. This was more of a test than anything. I was thinking of turning a small comic strip i made a while back into a little animation.
You can see what that would involve by clicking my Site link if you like.
Need to work on animation
I thought the character didn't need improvement (not that is was perfect, but good enough for flash films), but the animation was pretty bad. Look like you kept it at 12fps, and the animation was just kind of...cluncky, I think would describe it. I think it will make it though the portal, but I wouldn't expect a good score.
FFFreak16 responds:
Your right yes it was at 12fps. Thats inexperience on my part hehe. Anyway thank you for the review.
I welcome any constructive critism =)