it was ok
it was short and the animation wasnt all that great but it was ok. u should definantly keep the searies going but try to make them longer and clean up the graphics a little
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2.7/5 eh?! Thanks.
Haha blue man group
The animation is ok but the story line is too short. If you make it longer it will be more interesting to the public.
sh4w responds:
Yeah it's unfinished, it was way too long for me to be bothered to make. Long story short; the plan worked out then it all blew up and only Captain and Jon made it out alive. K?
I regret seeing this...
Well, what can i say.... Crap? Also, can u email me the end please? Laterz.
sh4w responds:
Constructive and detailed; what a review.
Why do you want the end if it's 'crap'?
Hum.
Er. Idea looks good, intro makes it somewhat pro, voices are good (at least not shitty microphones), but even if this is stickmen, it is, graphically, a big mess. But, you look like having some experience. I can just tell you to work harder, this won't cut it out, sorry. You got, unfortunately, a 1.
Good luck.
sh4w responds:
Yeah, you're totally right. I made it almost 2 years ago, skimmed over some parts I could've done better and then quit flash when I realised I didn't really have any artistic talent. There was supposed to be a lot more to this that I didn't do. One thing though, the bit zooming in on the helicopter where the lines are way too thick, I can't remember what happened with that but it used to look a lot better...tried to fix it and it didn't work.
Thanks fo the review.
not bad
timing/voicing is way off tho
sh4w responds:
Yeah it was my first and last try at lip-synching.
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