not bad
not bad it was longer jus make it faster and you will get perfect scores
Author Comments
Hey guys! this is my first time using flash, and my first entry to Newgrounds!
Please judge lightly...
EDIT- thanks for the reviews... I'm currently working on my second flash, which has much better graphics, and a story line... yes, that's right, a story line!
Greater detail needed.
For a first attempt at a movie, this wasn't bad I suppose. A lot of tweening with simple graphics and nothing really resembling a plot at all mans that it isn't really that good a movie as a whole though.
Try and make the grpaics mrpe detailed and make a plot for your next movie so it's more than just random figures fighting.
Passable~
This will make it [as of what i believe] but i think there are too less keyframes. it look slike, you put a key frame every like, 15 frames or so, and put them in a new position in each one. If you were to take, let's say, Madness, it runs at 20 FPS, and the keyframes are 0 - 2 frames from eachother. they also include FBF effects. I noticed the fire from the gun was a tweened object following the gun. If it were filter-blurred, and tweened with gradient shadow on te people, and realistic body reactions to the shots and wounds, then it would be much better.
Just a little addition, not much. Highlight an object and press Properties>Filters for the photoshop in-flash tools.
If you plan on making another animation prior to this, it would really help out, promise~
Also if you wanna work together on anything sometime, that would be cool too. =P
thats all i guess o_o;
-SeKret
Um...
This is like the Madness Series but a remake...and a lot crappier. But good job. you kept it flowing and you didn't make it super lame and boring. But the frame rate should be faster, everything seemed to slow.
