good
good cartoon
Author Comments
Welcome to hell. In repentance for suicide, a man is subjected to 200 years of agony. This is the second episode of my "Demon's Horror" series. I know it's not long, but its not meant to be cause I wanted the series to be composed of a bunch of horrifying quickies. While this isn't "horrifying" per se, it still is violent and creepy. Enjoy!!
Well,
It's not bad. I like your art style a lot. However, I think it was a bit too short... Perhaps work on it a little more? I bet it could be a lot better, Even tho it is pretty good.
Disappointing
Honestly... I expected a lot more considering it's score and the reviews. To be fair, it has a nice concept, however the way you made it didn't please me at all. The drawings were awful, the animaiton too and the voice acting was absolutley terrible. Sadly for you, it gets worse. The story was also too shallow, I mean the guy just shot himself out of nowhere and goes to Hell. Then he gets burned and that's it. The animaition does not give me any sensation of being creepy or horrifying like you described.
Sorry dude that's just how I see it, I know I am a pain in the ass and I've been called an asshole and a son of a bitch for being a little harsh.
To make a long story short, it did not impress me and it does not deserve the score it has.
Try harder next time...
Interesting
I really enjoy your art style. Some of the scenes are rather detailed and it was really interesting to see an FBF with an emboss filter. I had a few technical issues, the audio needs work, the voices seem distant, and why do I have to hit play twice? For a movie under 1 MB I shouldn't have to hit play at all. Other than that, I was intrigued by the piece.
demoninabottle responds:
thanks man!! Glad you liked it
i agree
find a better way to do the voices
demoninabottle responds:
yeah...my voice sux
