Hello again...
I appear to be a little late... oh well... I have a life too. Anyways, Animations definitely getting better. So good job with that. I noticed the lines on the gun. its really small things like that which make the piece look much better. And nice intro, it fits rather nicely with the rest of the movie. Hmmm... I have watched all your other pieces but frankly... this was one of the most confusing. Especially the flashy room part. I was a little confused as to whether the room was actually flashing in and out of existence or whether they were hallucinating/losing conscienceness. Also, it really didnt seem to fit with your other ones. none of them have actually seemed to fit together. I wonder if they are a series or just a group of flashes that follow the same characters/action theme. so just try to make the next one have a little more description... you've been doing much better though, so good job and good luck. Ill try to check up more often.