Hey there, everyone! I don't know how entertaining Donald Trump can be, but don't worry. It's about his completely unknown son, Waldow (I'm sure that will get everyone REALLY excited...). In reality, this movie was very spontanious (it was originally an experiment in lip synching and getting used to the tools of flash), so it doesn't make very much sense all together, but it is still fun to watch.
This is the first project that I've completed on flash, but it still should be pretty good. If the music in the background cuts out alot, thats because the computer is not running the flash at the correct fps, and I cut the sound apart to save memory. I noticed that this flash doesn't run very well on some computers, so if it is laggy, perhaps it is the computer your using (it runs fine on mine)
Well that was unexpected, the door getting kicked down, that menacing voice... it wasn't what I was expecting when the initial stick figure popped up. Overall it's a really varied mixxture of styles, some Pokemon (?) interface, blur effects, stick figures, real muscly body-structures, simple figures, photoshop (?) backgrounds, real photos with lipsync... it's all like one big experiement. It's a bit like a collab in how all the different styles are mixed. Looks good!
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that was a pretty nice animation. the graphics were alright, it had a very nice and interesting plot and story behind it, decent characters and it was nice for a first animation as well. the audio and sound in this one however, wasn't very good at all... you should really fix it up, or use something different. i would recommend looking at a couple sound tutorials and the NG Audio Portal in order to help you out, otherwise, this was a nice animation.
well.....
i'd say keep trying. your artwork was great, but the audio was awful. it's nothing against you personally, but keep working at it and it will eventually work out.
Interesting, but poor voice quality.
Interesting. This submission has decent artwork, but the only thing that I didn't like was the poor voice quality.
JESUS MY EARS!
Well... Hmmm. This could have been so good, I'll say that. You really need to sharpen up your visuals. Clean it all up. Right now you lines and shit were everywhere. Just all over the place. Work on that, cuz they drawings could have been good an the animation was actually above par.
The main downfall though was the sound, and sound quality. Your sound was just terrible, all over. There was static and poor sound for most of the voices. I understand that they were ripped, but clean em up all the same. You effects were to loud and just didn't sound right. If you have music playing, you don't raise the volume of everything else above the music, you drop the music down.
So yah, really work up cleaning up your art, and getting crisp solid sound for you next piece, and it could be good.