needs some work

- sub-par graphics
- not humorous
- almost inaudible voices
- undescriptive author comment
- overdone concept
- poor frame rate

+ good effort

Original drawings?

More work needed

I think a rough idea of what your planning to do and more thought put into the humor would have really helped this usbmission out.
As it stands it seems more like a series of images thrown together with an improv voiceover

Hmm

Love it. Dunno why. Hope that critically helps in the production of your next flashes.