umm its hard to comment
well it was beautifully drawn and the motion wasent that bad but it was going no where, its just a bit of a animation relli and not relli a full length flash.
Author Comments
I know, theres a lot of errors in it but I tried okay? First try with four legs :D I know the back right foot pauses for a couple of frames, I know in one frame there is a line missing on the back right foot. I know I accidentaly put a sort of lag on the front left foot too. I tried to get the feet that are diagonal to eachother to move together and I succeeded for the most part with the right front and the left back but not the other two -.- bleh. I also know the curve in the tail is too pointy in some frames and that there is a line seperating the toes on one of the frames for the front left foot. I think I was paying attention to everything else and not that foot. It seems to be the one creating most of the problems. I'm gunna try it again! X3 mabey I won't have as many errors in this one 8D *raises drink* here's to hope! I don't think I did the shoulderblade thingy right either -.o
its good
HOWEVER, lizards don't walk like that. Not even the ones with long legs like Komodo Dragons.
Lizards always keep their bodies close to the ground. And they never move their legs like that. The way a lizard walks is the same way a frog swims. With the legs moving in pairs in short quick jittery motion.
Now, if this had been a dog, tiger, deer, etc the walk cycle would be perfect for the animal it's meant to me.
The actual walk cycle itself is good. It's very smooth, the feet touch the ground all around the same level, so it looks like a very natural walk.
So good job.
O...k...
You are a beginning author, and that's probably better than what I could do with flash. Actually, the animation is very fluid, but... it's only a loop. Sry. :(
Looked good.
But not really much to it. Make a movie out of it or something. You've got the drawing ability, put it to good use!
Dude that was boring
be more creative like add eyes a nose a mouth and more dinosaurs and make some action like fighting or shooting and dude there wont be a walking dinosaur 2 if theres not gonna be a walking dinosaur 1