Expect a call from my lawyers...

...you lazy bum! So I noted that the music comes from Kingdom Hearts. I think that's the most endearing factor of this piece, to be frank.

The animation really grates against me, as I feel that it's a style that I could easily accomplish - and I have no talent in that field, at all. Some of the writing is a little difficult to read and it flashes off the screen before I could read some of the words - they weren't written in the best fashion.

I'm hoping that the next few episodes will do this justice.

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funny

in a way...

hai

this one is cute. Like, two stick figures wondering about wtf is happening. Also that faic of the happy dude is what made my day ten minutes before midnight. The graphics suck badly but who cares about that

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I didn't think it was too bad at all. Parts of it were funny, like the "What just happened part?". I was thinking the same thing just as that came up. I like the style of talking and putting facial expression and such. Look forward to watching a few more episodes.

^^Needs Improving^^
White background is kind of boring. You should put some kind of background, even if it's just a solid color other than white.

Come up with an Idea first

Here's the best bit of advice I can offer you. Come up with an idea first, then start drawing. Stick figures can be awsome, their not the problem. The problem is you have two characters looking at each other saying, "what do you wanna do?", "I don't know what do you wanna do?" I think if you get an idea of some sort then get stuck in you cant go wrong!