Very good...
That was very good for your first cartoon. Nice job.
Author Comments
This is our first cartoon on Newgrounds. We (nicknamed J and M) enjoy creating cartoons and were excited when we had the idea of creating a series for this website. I have been doing this for a long time, but have only begun to strive to make quality work. M has been doing this for less than a year. This cartoon has only taken us five days, but we are very proud of it. We are both 13 and consider this very good for our age. This episode introduces our new series, School Stories. Please feel free to give criticism and advice, as we are always looking for was to improve. We hope you enjoy!
funny, spine-tingling & just plain wonderful
I believe this is a very funny first video on newgrounds. I have also been experimenting with flash so hopefully you will make another episode and we can laugh even more. Lastly, excelent first video.
Amazing
Great Job! One of the best first time cartoons i've ever seen
OK.
You need to get a better voice for that teacher, but it was OK nonetheless.
Excellent!
A very fine first flash! improve those voices and animation and you couuld be the next Tom Fulp!