im sorry
i usually right helpful reviews and tell people how to fix the flash, there is just too much wrong with yours, no saving it. just start over and do everything better.
Author Comments
It's about a guy that has been backstabbed by three men he trusted - his brothers, his bestfriend and his former boss (staying unknown until next part) and the story begins as he just shot down his best friend that's waiting for his realifing death, his bodyguard and they are all outside his brothers compound....
Extra - I've noticed that some of you have gotten the idea that I tried to make it funny - wich I was not trying to do... Second - The place his bestfriend lays outside, is the compound
And third, when the main character walks to the guard, it's because he's just in the "lobby" and the door you see - is the door to the compound - just making sure nothing else can be misunderstood, and I mean really, really - Did he at all sound like Arnold Schwzarzenegger? (Can't spell it)
Not too good
First of all, you really need to draw better, way better than you do now to make the graphics passable in front of our NG users. Then, you need to make the movie longer, all I saw was a guy leaving another guy who was dying and then killed the gunner. Fortunately enough for you, this movie passed the judgement which should be a big encouragement for you considering that you are still new to flash. Well...like I have mentioned, work on your graphics and try to make the movie longer and more entertaining. You have a huge space for improvement.
huh?
Graphics:3/10
Sounds:3/10
Story:3/10
Overall:3/10
This animation made little to no sense. For the first few seconds of the flash there is no sound, Im not sure if thats a glitch or intentional, then the main character sounds like arnold schwartzinegger. The characters themselves look very primitive and overall horrible, the animation is bad too. When they talk, a circle just comes over there mouth....doesnt make good animation. Also, the author comment you posted said something about backstabbing brothers and a compound, none of which made an appearance in this flash. Worse of all the actual animation left me dumbfounded on how hard it was to understand. Make some changes, put a little more time and effort in it, then we will have a above worthy flash.
Not good, but
I really enjoyed the voice acting! Well, just work on your graphic skills a bit more.
ICYCREWPRODUCTIONS responds:
I've heard that so many times, my voice acting must be good :O ;D
save your time, dont make a part 2
firstly, what was goin on?!! like the dude said below violence can be funny, but thier was no humor or story to it.