Nice try.

Well, pretty good with graphics and stuff for your first flash movie, but it was to short. If you had put more time and effort into it, you probably could have made the top page. If of course you made it funnier... yeah.. good try at it though

Not bad!

Quite well done for your first flash! Let's see some more!
Good job guy!

oooh

Started a story line that could have been funny if you kept it going.

ive seen worse

it was better than u think.... but i could really be improved

Well... what is with the file size!>!?!?

Welll it was kinda funny, but my main point is, WHY THE HELL IS IT 4.5MB!??!

Please reduce the file size next time. I was expecting much, much more than a 30 second clip.

I did find it funny, but it all went too fast, and there were some errors in graphics (see white bar in screen when mario is falling)
Remember, motion tweens arent the best, but if you do use them, try to make it look good.

The main reason this is getting a low score is because of the crazy file size.