If you just make the text a little bigger and put a thin white stroke on it it would be much better.
Not bad imho.
Poem was alright, liked the story behind it :p. Dunno if it was just me, but the actual cartoon behind it was really jolty. Good effort though :).
I've heard that music before
Its in FF 7 in Shinra mansion.....I think.
Its very abstract, nice...
Yep, I would agree with this story. Better to die in a few days than live forever... Think of how boring you'd get...
it was half of a flash
i was too impatient
great looking, but needs more action.