A fast paced fight scene.
Work on your transitions and camera position.
Every transition you used between perspectives is like hitting a tiny brick wall. It makes the whole thing feel very jerky and jilted. Other than that, it's a good attempt at a somewhat inetersting fight scene,
not bad, but not a flash
It was a good video, I'll give you credit for that. most home video's camera work sucks, but you did well there. However as previously stated this is not a flash, there fore I question weather or not it is meant for new grounds, as the flash portal is intended for animation. If it had of included some sort of animation it would be far more suitable.
We are NOT animators, for the last time. I'm glad you enjoy our film, but PLEASE quit complaining that it isn't flash. Newgrounds is a much better site than YouTube (for the record, we DO have an account there), as more people see our work here. If you enjoy our films, give them good scores. If you hate them, god bless, but the fact that it isn't flash is no reason to hate our stuff. Not to be too defensive about our work, but we'd prefer to hear other opinions besides the fact that it isn't flash, so therefore it doesn't belong here. We don't mean to be so rude, but PLEASE STOP complaining about the lack of animation, for the love of god.
Heh
Althought it wasnt a flash, it made me chuckle for a second or 2. It was a bit lame when it all pans out, but its better than something i could do.
funny and pretty good!
but I'm not really sure it belongs on newgrounds. but either way you got a good score from me cause the fight scene itself was done very well not great but still very eneteraining and the last line got a good laugh out of me!!!
Ok.
The movie takes too long to load, and to be honest isn't worth the wait. I certainly didn't. Also, the flash portal is for flashes. Not home videos. Those are for YouTube.
Next time:
- Make a flash animation
- Make the wait time shorter
Thanks.
You really are stupid ass people. Oh god it isnt a aniamtion so lets rate low, doesnt matter if its a awesome video. God damn you people.