Could use some fine-tuning
Well, the concept was certainly one that's been done before. However, with a little fine tuning, I can see you making this into a decent movie.
1) Zoom in while drawing, to give you greater control of the cursor and help you to draw more rounded figures. Maybe consider buying a graphics tablet?
2) Make a black space underneath the movie pictures. In this, type the subtitles, as it saves you a) animation space and b) makes them easier to read. Perhaps consider an 'advance button', which would allow faster readers to skip the text when they've read it - some gaps were too long.
3) Soundtrack - maybe add further tracks, like something with a pumping base beat for the combat, as the track you used wasn't something I'd ever consider for a fight between two men - not even camp men.
4) Colour - A change of colour for one of the guys help tell them apart during the fight.
Hope you work with these changes and I look forward to seeing the second episode.
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