great story
the story was great so whoever came up with that story is a pure genius.
Author Comments
My brother and some of his friends thought up the story and asked me to make an animation, since I haven't used flash in a while and I am still kind of new at it, so I thought it would be a good place for me to start.
Since I am still new at this please be understanding and don't blam because it doen't quite match up with the pros here.
I optimized the audio but I have had audio problems on NG before so if there are any I will fix them.
***EDIT***
If you are going to give a critical review, offer some constructive criticism. Not just you suck you poo head...
wtf
The last time I saw legs move like hers... wait... I've never seen legs move like that.
The idea could have been great, but the lack of effort you put into the animation and art work was very clear.
Practice animating simple animations like body parts (esp. legs), and roads. and oblique footpaths.
To be continued..?
Please don't.
conjohn9 responds:
Juist for you, I think I will continue, with more KNEE BENDING GOODNESS
ummmm.....
That 'dog' doesn't even look like a dog.....draw better ones.....PLEASE!!!!!
conjohn9 responds:
I intend to
yes but no.
amuzing idea witht he switching musics but the animation realy let it down.
not only did it just generally look bad but the dog transforms into a completly different one.
conjohn9 responds:
I was supposed to do the dogs diferently...alas its ok
Its ok.
4/5. 7/10. Not a very funny flash nor a good one but its ok. Though you used the audio in the right places, its just not greatly drawn out. Where's The humor? Granny vs Dog. I'm sure the title sugessts it is but you dont make it look like it. Come on. Wheres the Fighting? Suspense? Action? I just dont want to see a gun cane shoot and thats it... I mean when they look each other eye to eye, I mean its pretty intense but nope... Use cane. Boom. It needs the real fighting. like killing and killing from head to toe. I hope you do better next time.
conjohn9 responds:
Thanks, next time (if there is one) I will give the suspense, the action, the drama, the complete pointlessness that this cartoon deserves!
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