This needs some work

I really like the background music. But the drawings need some work. First off, the characters looked really small at points and then out of proportion at other points. You need to work on line quality and drawing detailed backgrounds. It looked like this was a rather rushed flash. It's best to take your time and work at your own pace. Come up with a plan and put it together piece by piece. Nice try though.

not good enough

nothing to new or interesting goes perfect with this 2/5 make a interestinger plot
and make it longer

it was fun to watch.

it was pretty amusing, so i vote 3, or 5. but you better improve your style and story, or it will be dul . so you better make a longer flash with better design, and a best sounds. i liked the humour. oh brave knight, we need yo to...un plump the toilet. hahahah, it was fun

need to improve

you need to improve on the walking, talking,i couldnt even read some of the stuff they said because the backround is too dark and most of all, the graphics weren't that great.

ok.,

i hope you make better stuff, if you keep it up you could make good movies.
advice for movies, make frame rate above 23, MINIMUM!
but if this is one of your first flashes, then its ok.