You used all the good bits before. The animation is crude. The story goes nowhere and you swear merely to be offensive.
Please write a storyline, and animate it properly with carefully drawn images.
Don't be offensive just to offend. Newgrounds is about fun not vulgarity.
Just plain do it better with more care and craft, you have glimmers of skill so damn well use em boyo! Show some hywl
I don't even know if it was trying to be funny, but it sure as hell wasn't. Using MS Sam wasn't a good idea either.
Nothing too new nor interesting
Its a start but I think this is all that it is. A start. Also adding a "F*ck this" at the end of it isnt what, I think, is considered good taste. Still, it is a start hopefully you'll find something that will inspire you to create something and finish it to the end.
Tell saiko1 what you think of his review!
its good, great, but you could have put a better end...
the enDING WAS GREAT