Good

Very deep, it got me thinking. -3 for the ending since it's non-relevant and seems like product placement.

admirable attempt

there aren't many flash artist who make stuff like this with a sincere message for people to reflect on. i liked the day-planner format, it sort of gave off a contemplative and scholarly feeling. i took one point away because the link at the end led to some myspace band, which technically means that this flash is promoting an "unreal code" set up as a norm by the media/pop culture, which, and i quote "embelishes reality with suspence and drama" for the purpose of entertainment. it's a slightly hipocritical thing to do, but the rest of it was well written and genuine.

wow......

thats really deep and really true......

odd style

but i'm diggin it