not bad
way better them the beginning ones nice job
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I know some of you were expecting better animation, but i am working better in chapter 7, i made chapter 5 a long time ago, so don´t expect it to be very good, anyway, here it is.
I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
like i said your improving but...
you need way more action and not the crappy action i mean where everybody moves!!!! There are two things really bugging me. One lack of action. Two the movements just don't seem right i mean he lets then enemy get really close to him and then shoots him way to fast. No offense by this but you should watch the madness movies and study them a little more. There are a LOT of little things that need improvements to form it nicely. If your havin trouble making the dudes you can just ask krinkels nicely. Also just like last time GET BETTER BACKGROUNDS!!! If you want more ideas on how to improve this just pm me. But on the plus side this is waaaaaaayyyy better than the other four. I give it a five due to the bunch of little things that are really bugging me.
wow you know what?
this was better, like 5 times better than 2,3,and 4 combined.
hopefully you can make some more original characters, and improve in your animating skills!
but one thing you need to stop, is making really wierd and deformed madness guys,because im wondering, are they henchmen, or did he make an accident?
adollfo responds:
thaks, and yeah, haha, there is a problem, i was making theyr heads a perfect circle, and theyr body to tall and fat, in one part of ep.7 is still like that, but the rest, it´s going better.
Its alright
I agree with the guy below me. ill give you a 2/5 so its alright :)
Okay......
Um just a few tips,
-You might want to set the frame rate higher and take more time to smooth out your animation.
- Its waaaaay to choppy and the guy just stands there and does nothin while the people all come to him.
- Look at krinkels movies and take note on how he animates his movies by right clicking and pressing "Forward" to see how much he moves each frame.
Hope you succeed in your next one (: