(I'm re-submitting this in 3 different parts to make it easier to watch.)
This is a children's story I wrote awhile ago. I intended to make it into a Pixar type movie using Blender3d, but I've since decided to focus on other projects. CONTAINS A LOT OF READING!!!
Plot synopsis:
Part 1:
When EVILCORP unveils the brand new X!treme Day, Bratwerst and Fuzzen both think it's better than Christmas. However, when the new robot Santa turns out to be full of technical glitches, they become worried. After visiting EVILCORP headquarters, they realize X!treme Day isn't as awesome as it seems.
Theres room on this page for another review.
No ones reviewed this for a hole year and in that hole year you didn't respond to either of them?!?!?
Some stuff is much much more worse then this believe me.
Maybe you should change the cheesey story line and add some guns or somthing?
Or maybe a sexy Mrs Cluas... because sex is good!
Not bad
That electronical noise is echoing in my head....hahah
But other than that, it was good.
Lol!
That was funny and the graphics were quite good. The music however was often annoying, and I think if you had used actual voices instead of written text on the screen it would have been better, but overall it was pretty good!
really cool
Ok i am from nyc so it really made me want to watch it. But besides that it was a pretty cool flash and look forward to seeing #2 of the series. The artwork was cool and it was just an over all good flash
Good work