great job

Good work for your first flash animation, and hell we all get better with time. For criticism, I'd suggest using backgrounds you can search for on image searches for the scenes you want, and try finding a nice sprite sheet for all the sprite pieces

OK for ur first

i got it 27 pts up so..........it was cool ok use of bomberman sprites but keep updating and working on it

yea

il give it a 5 rating and a 10 starfor ur first.
i got ur score up .01 by the way :)

For your first flash

It seems like a good start. Work on your music transitions, perhaps learn some orb effects for your DBZ style blasts, or better yet, get them using weapons. The lights in the second part definitely should have been using some transparency tricks instead of being just pure yellow.

Good work putting in a preloader to stop it looping over and over, and the sprites actions were okay.

Not too much..

Its not that great but I like it I suggest you make a series when you get better and if our lucky it will become an internet phenomon like xiao xiao.