Not the best but...

I give you 5 Stars. Why, you will say.
Because it's been 5 reviews i made in a row and they were all worthless. (Just to give an example, a flash with only one image...) Compare to your flash, you are a real genius.

At least, yours had some actions and had a story. I'm sure with more time and more effort, you'll get good reviews. Try to develop the storyboard of your flashs and it'll be ok.