The Uncompleted

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Because apparently nothing can get blammed on clock day...
incomplete flashes over the years

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Everyone has their "slush pile"

Your first Clock Day submission, unless I'm mistaken. I like the fact that you've gone to the trouble of getting 5 or 6 pieces of unfinished work and stitched them together. It really does show people that you've been working, but procrastination for one reason or another has set in, causing issues of one type or another.

This piece does have some good bits, though the ending did leave a lot to be desired, with the white screen of doom, with that piece of music from Pulp Fiction over the top. An audio credit here would have been really nice, as it's a great piece of music.

With the guitar, get SRM's hand moving up and down the neck, so he can play some notes - little things make all the difference. You could quite easily have expanded upon this piece to make the Kitty Shooting piece your Clock Day entry, by having them die in funny ways for a loop of extreme violence, as SRM takes on the KK and wins, by the looks of it.

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Battosai810 responds:

This was just a bunch of unfinished cartoons I'd been working on, and really the reasons I gave up on them were because they just weren't that good mostly. The SRM dystopian future one was going to have some sort of ninja SRM come in, but I scrapped it since I don't like pointless violence Flashes that much.

A few parts of this were actually made for it just because it wouldn't take long, like the Jebediahs on paper part. The only reason I released this at all was because I found that nothing gets blammed on Clock Day, so I figured why the hell not.

You get to see SRM play a guitar quite a few more times in cartoons as time goes on, sometimes better than others. This was just my first (admittedly iffy) experiment with it.

Some of those look pretty good,

Some of those look pretty good if they had been completed. Some were just totally random. Good work anyways though. And is it true that nothing can be blammed on clock day?

Battosai810 responds:

Some of these I would have liked to complete at the time, but I usually got distracted and made something better.
Things can be blammed on Clock Day, but almost everyone votes 5 on everything, so very little actually gets blammed.


hey, gj. But u have an aim? whatisit? mines jimmy000999 (add me!)

Battosai810 responds:

Mine's Battosai810 (as it says in my profile) but I might be changing that before too long - some guy might've hacked me...

Not too bad, but finish it!

Well, I liked the randomness of it all and the mass amount of meanwhiles didn't make it suck, but on the contrary enhanced it. Tie in a few more random ideas you casn't make into an entire animation and you'll be set!

Battosai810 responds:

these were all animations i never bothered to finish. most of these have been lost to the depths of time, so i wouldn't hold my breath if i was you... i would like to do some things in it though, like SRM's dystopian future...


you've done it again! made another masterpiece, SRM, im proud of you, and you to battosai810!!

P.S. why arent you on AIM anymore?

Battosai810 responds:

i've been real busy - looking at colleges for animation and music and the like, i've mostly been staying off AIM so i can focus on some work.
anyway, thanks for reviewing! since i lost the .fla i didn't even get to finish my collection of unfinished flashes... odd

Credits & Info

4.20 / 5.00

Aug 16, 2007
12:38 AM EDT
Comedy - Original