Greatness! ^_^

That was too funny,just a blunt flash of having Strawberry Clock knock Strawberry Lock's head/face off,i really loved it and got a kick out of it also it was funny to see Strawberry Clock actually have a mouth,great job.

Meh.

As always with a lot of these submissions the graphics are really good, but there really isn't any substence to it, I mean it's not bad or anything, it just doesn't seem that interesting. Other then really the good graphics there really isn't anything to this submission. Meh.

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics were pretty good. You had good animations and drawings, especially in the punching motion. Looked pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs a little bit more though. Maybe you could add a few more things other than just simply punching the guy. Or maybe some kind of movie added to the beginning instead.