Umm...
Dude, get the story straight. Look up what happened in the matrix. The Animatrix was written by the guys who wrote the matrix and has the story. GET IT RIGHT!!!
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Thanks a lot for your support! I am now on another animation project, so will soon be back!!! Hope your support continues................
.......Thank you too newgounds, for giving me an oppurtunity to reveal my imagination!
It is a small story about a guy , who realises that, the Earth's resources are getting depleted and that we have to act fast to save the planet!!! A short story! Good music ! This is my first entry to Newgrounds.com ! Hope. all of you enjoy this animation! Comments and suggestions are widly invited!!!It is ppl like you and your comments that help me improve ! I will try to deliver a better presentation next time ! As told already before, this was my first entry to newgrounds ! Thank you ppl ! Keep the comments comin !
- DHIPAK ( Prof-Dypher )
Nice ^^
I firstly want to say that I don't agree with that the graphics suck, but there is plenty room for improvement as well :) (you maybe already know this, but the core of drawing is just practising and practising, it doesn't matter whether you're talented or not. Even profesionals will always try to improve their drawing skills)
Anyways. I draw and write, but I never made a flash myself, so I have to warn everybody not to flame this. Just like everybody else's review, this review just contains my thought and opinion.
I think that the music fits good in the flash. Especially the song of MilkMan-Dan gives the flash a beautiful feeling and I think it definitely makes the message stronger and more important.
About the graphics, it's not a masterpiece, but it isn't unwatchable either. I think the backgrounds are very nicely made and I love the use of colours and layers in here, but my complaint lies with drawing too rectangular. Then again, it's probably your style, but it's not very realistic. I think the face and body needs some improvement because I saw some anatomical mistakes, but I think you'll learn it yourself if you keep drawing and drawing. Using examples is very useful too, because then you don't have to guess what's right and what's wrong, for drawing more realistic that is.
Just keep doing what you want to do and what you think is wise. My opinion and advice is not a fact, you'll have to judge for yourself what to do.
The story, well, I enjoyed that the most ^^ I'm a person who cares about the world and nature too, so that definitely got my attention. I'm sure I will not be the only one, since, as many know, it's indeed a problem in the world.
Anyway, I love how you made the message of helping the world stronger, by the use of that dream of how the world can possibly look like if we do nothing.
And as whole, I give this flash a 4/5 and a 8/10 :) The background is nice already, but it would be even more awesome if you practise more with the anatomy of humans. But then again, it's my opinion, just do what you think is the best :)
I also forgot to mention that adding facial expression could make the flash more realistic and emotional, but that's up to you of course. :)
The rest is nicely done, so good job ^^
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the animation left something to be desired, as well as the voice acting could have used a little more emotion as well as some distiction between the human and robot, the only thing that had any substance was the story line. the story line had some potential and there was great message but the animation killed it
lol
its ok but the graphics suck dunno what this guys saying below me
pretty good
this movie is good the graphics are ok, the music was good the only bad thing was the voice acting other than pretty good cant wait to see another movie by you
