nice
This one is the best flash from you. Quite funny, ok graphics and good character, but there's lack of storyline and animation could've been better. I'm looking forward to your next one.
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-- JONASVALGO
Lorkas responds:
Thank you. Though I wasn't quite proud in the making of this movie. But I got over it, and actualy finished.
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie you made. The graphics were impressive. Nice shading and very nice FBF animations. Like the beginning, when the guy jumped in the air. Definitely some animating skill here.
^^Needs Improving^^
Not a great storyline. Didn't really develop much. I would definitely like to see much more work from you, but it needs to have a bit more of a storyline to it.
Lorkas responds:
Hi! Thanks, that means alot to me.
Hmmm...In my opinion the Jumping scene was the best, but I was dissapointed about the last one (where he's reading) because it didn't turn out too well.
Anyway, I'll be improving my Snake movie and resubmitting it (probably), so stay tuned!
mmmk..
Was kinda short and didnt realy make much sence
Lorkas responds:
It was 42 seconds long...a usual timing for flash movies.
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It's short, and the sponge seems to be really easy, that green man killed him in one hit, you should make longer fight, and better story. 1 star for animation.
Lorkas responds:
Well the news paper made an elephant from a fly...the sponge would've just burned.
im lost
didnt make much sense to me >.<
no sound too
Lorkas responds:
There WAS sound.