Good to see people helping people

I myself have not used flash, nor do I know how, but I will use this and see if I can make one. Kudos

Not appealing to the eye.

The only good thing I can say is that you did have good music.

Unfortunately, there were problems with spelling, and you haven't presented it in a format that people can get to grips with easily. It's just the same font, same colour, and an example that is small and hard to make out.

Think of adding colour to your next tutorial, and present it in a user-friendly format.

ok i see how tyhis can be helpful but.....

oh my god this is borning! try to make it alittle bit more fun.

Nice attempt...

....But boring as hell, jazz it up a little. Was really simple ActionScript, I guess it's for beginers. It should have been made longer, it only covered a tiny bit of actionscript and it's needs more color!