Good for first.

Okay it was pretty good, but you need SOUND. Also, if the movie is "to be continued" a coherent plot would be nice. one last thing, although I can't expect you to become a better artist, better graphics would be nice.

nice

you are a very good flash artist, but you really need to put sound into your flash. try going to flashkit.com and soundfx

needs sound

Your animation and drawing are very nice, but you really need sound. Even if it's just music or something, it's better than nothing. Otherwise, I liked it a lot.

Review

very good for a first flash, shows you have good potential... suggestions: definietely get some sound on it and work on the animations a litttle but good job

mmmh...

nice, but put some sounds!