A bit slow
Most of the action was realy slow in playing out. I almost closed the window when, after sitting in front of the first intro text for about 3 minutes (having had plenty of time to READ it, for God's sake) the narrator started to (very slowly) read the same text (that I just spent the last 3 minutes reading and re-reading) to me. And that kinda set the tone fot the rest of the action presented. The main character was odd, to say the least. Kinda poorly drawn and animated. Most of the animation was done using tweens... which doesn't have to be a bad thing sometimes, but I think this movie severely suffered for it.
For the guy asking about the loading bars every couple minutes... judging by the 0.1 KB file size uploaded to Newgrounds, the actual movie isn't even hosted here, but is being called up in parts from separate URL's.